Without warning.. a small fluffy dog ran past the old lady as her eyes widened. Her glasses fell off, she dropped her purse and her old brown walking stick too. The old lady stood up slowly as a turtle ran. But the old lady still had her welcoming friendly smile.
Notice how there was a adverbial phrase at the start? Without Warning ..... For our create task we had to make a random little story about the old lady, here's mine down bellow.
The old lady shaked and shivered to the front door to answer to three little children standing there with a smile on there face. she mumbiles
“Hello dear, how can I help you three lovely children”
“Hi there we're just wondering if you have any sugar, we're baking a cake and we don't have any at home”
“of course children follow me”
The children slammed the door behind the them, the old lady slowly walked to her kitchen, she reached over to the copard as she just got the handle, the door squeaked, he grabbed the sugar BUT THEN! The sugar poured all over her dirty old tiles, her face shined as the grandma said
“Oh no, mind giving me a hand”
“of course, but we cant be two long mum will get worried”
The children helped the grandma, as they went home with a great big smile on their face.
Have you ever write a story like this?
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