Welcome back to another blog about my writing!
For writing WK4 I had to write a poem of my choice, aslo in writing we were learning about spelling.
Like adding "ing" to words , along with "ed" and when adding "ing" you usually drop the E!
For our poems we had to add a simile and a alliteration! a simile is when you kind of describe something, like "my dad is as tall as a giraffe," or using "as" and "like." Alliteration is when you repeat the same sound in the two words that are next to each other! Also we had to find a cool way to decorate our poem, making it look cool, I used canva! I will be sharing a picture of my poem!
(Forgot to mention I write my poem about winter, since its been quite cold lately)
Heres a clearer version of my poem in words!
As the cold atmosphere makes me shiver.
The rain stops and I tend to flinch.
Everything went so quite what a myth.
I touch the rain, my body freezes with ice and snow.
The town is quite apart from the wind that blows.
Heres the picture! (With canva) 
Hi Ruby
ReplyDeleteGreat winter wonderland poem. I really like the way you have described winter. Winter is my favourite time of year, I cant wait to see some snow on the mountains.
Do you like winter?
Steve